 .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2009-11-24 . chapter 1Not everything is horrible.
This piece is not horrible. So many people can relate to it. Remember whenever you feel alone... there's someone out there that's feeling your pain, too.
I'm sorry. I'm not usually one to give advice/comfort within a review; I think it's kind of cheesy and imposing. But this piece (and especially the note at the end) really got me thinking about things.
The second line is so, so good. It sums up what I felt for like four years of my life in six words. It's been almost a year since I let the blade control me. Take it from me, life's better when you don't depend on pain.
-stix- |
 fatbird33 2008-08-26 . chapter 1oo this is super dark. i really liked the last line. very...eerie. don't be sad though Smile:) keep it up |
 Radioactive Jeans 2008-07-05 . chapter 1It's simple and short, and yet it says everything.
This one you've written, it's more than words to me. Good job!
*Here's a hug and a bag of stars for you. :) |
 aiurwaves. 2008-07-05 . chapter 1This is really sad =/
I really hope you're not considering anything like this...
Anyways, you're a brilliant writer, you know that right?
-giggles- Just thought I'd tell you that, and also that I appreciate your reviews. Really I do.
I thought I'd return the favor- again, thank you so much for reviewing my poetry. Mine pales in the comparison of your haiku's.
Keep writing brilliantly!
- daisy dreams. |
 Cross Rose 2008-05-18 . chapter 1That's cool. |
 Daiysis 2008-05-11 . chapter 1I hate that feeling... it's almost like instinct has taken over, and you know what you're doing is wrong but, you can't help it. You can't stop... Take care of yourself, k? *hug* Lots of love is headed your way, just keep your head up, it'll be okay... |
 Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-01 . chapter 1powerful haiku :)
I know the feeling. but we have to have hope, because it will get better. *hugs* |
 j'aimemavie 2008-04-28 . chapter 1i love it! your right it is kinda suicidal. But dont we all love suicidal stuff! |
 Random-Idiocity 2008-04-27 . chapter 1Wonderful haiku. It does feel like not everyone can be saved at one point or another. Just as long as we find the strength to keep moving on, it all gets better. Keep it Up! |
 Simply Irresistible 2008-04-27 . chapter 1This haiku is definitely what I'm feeling most recently. Very job and right! *huggles* |
 Dreizehn 2008-04-26 . chapter 1wow, its very strong and emotional. i like ^-^ |