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| BlackestOpal 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abuseAw. Well done. Good job solidifying grief. This poem says so much. |
| Aquafied 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abusei am unsure of what this means if it is tear, like paper or tear, like eyes single things are the most lonely |
| Nemonus 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseIt's great, unique imagery, (It makes me think of the ocean, for some reason, of an abandoned beach house.) but I can't see "alabaster tear parades" or the connection between the two last lines. It took me a moment to realize that you might mean that grief is a crowding of tears ("alabaster" being a step up from black=sadness, eh?). The imagery is a little disjointed from the subject, and the title offers no explanation. |
| sleeping Pisces 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseInteresting imagery in this one. I really like the word use, and the title is fitting. Peace, Daze |