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no.peace.los.angeles
2008-05-02
ch 1,
I love how the end circles back to the beginning. Circular poems are lovely. That first stanza is probably my favorite; I love the phrase "tearstream darkness." That is just gorgeous. I also like the contrast between the darkness of a drug addict's life and the bright sunshine of a 99 degree day. Wonderful. Keep writing! :)
Aquafied
2008-04-28
ch 1,
it's not the 14th
but i swear to god it was 99 in anaheim yesterday

perhaps we are just a few weeks in advance
i just missed 11.11 for this review

i wear long sleeves in hot weather
dream of winter in summer
cool weather and hot weather
i'll never compromise
Leylique Morrow
2008-04-26
ch 1,
Exceptionally moving. Perfect blend of vivid and vague, concrete and abstract.

You misspelled "bleak."

I continue to envy your perspicacity and your ability to express it so fluidly.
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