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Angel of Avarice
2008-05-09
ch 4,
abuseOh. I will kill you.

What the effing hell is with the most freaking evil cliffy in the whole existence of the infinite universe?!

*Cries* Why?

*Sniff* Maybe I won't kill you cause then I'd have to bury you, and I might, just maybe, feel I bit bad if I do (kill you).

And I say this grudgingly but I'm happy for an update on my favored dust particle's whereabouts.

*Sigh* I just can't stay mad at you, come here *hug* I promise I'll at least keep you around until you finish this story *pats* then I don't know we'll have to see.
Quintessence-x
2008-05-04
ch 4,
abuse:O

So it will be like... the end of the world if they confess deep feelings for each other?! But it appears to be one-sided anyway. Aww :(

I can't wait to read more!!
Dust Mowt
2008-05-03
ch 3,
abuse**Swoons**. You...you..referenced me. **Screams with delight**

I LOVE YOU! And thank you so much for your reviews, you are my loverly!

And and and, this chapter? O_o, wow! Meaningful! I don't quite understand what's going on yet, or where guardian angels came from, but I love it!

Your, your, your writing, is too good -.-

You make me look rubbish!

But I LOVE this story, and I totally agree with Quintessence-x! You are WAY too underappreciated! Your writing rocks!

Natural disasters! Oh no! Stop them! Thye are scary!

And OMG! You put "My handwriting is amazing. Get over it."- YEAAH! I love that line! Its sounds exactly like something Lani would say! EXACTLY like! Wow! You're psychic or whatever you want to call it!

Sorry I took so long to review this, but yeah, I love it, and I hope the worthless rambling of this review makes up for it. LOVE YOU! And I'm starting to like your random references to Sweeney Todd in your correspondance with me. YEAH! Yay yay!
Angel of Avarice
2008-05-02
ch 3,
abuseThat was so unexpectedly gripping. I'm totally on edge. I have a feeling Storm Dust and PICKLEDPICKLE have some thing to do with the weather.

And the angels seem so cool with the hair changing thing, I'm really excited to see what Ayo and his guardian angel have to do with the story.

Onward little dust particle!
Quintessence-x
2008-05-01
ch 3,
abuseOkay, I guess I won't go slapping random people xD

I loved the letters back and forth! And I like how you showed things happening in the environment in different places. It makes me anxious to know what happens next! And the whole Angel thing too!

UPDATE SOON!!
Angel of Avarice
2008-04-30
ch 2,
abuseI love that we're keeping up with the dust partical because I'm feeling attaced to it and I would be sad if I didn't know where it was going. I should really be asking when they got each others numbers instead I want to know when their gonna meet face to face.

Okay I'm moving on now.
Angel of Avarice
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseThat was intresting and random, and I find myself wanting to read the next chapter,

(OY! PICKLEDPICKLE I totally have a save the earth tee- mine is made of recycled plastic)

I'm totally Pro- earth! Go Green! (excuse me while I hug my house plants)
Bloodfeeder94
2008-04-30
ch 2,
abuseSweet!!
Dust Mowt
2008-04-30
ch 2,
abuseRight. Simply because I can, this is going to be the story of yours that I review every chapter.

Wo! Thankee for recognising my hard work as a reviewer! It's a tough job, but SOMEONE's got to do it.

So it does have significance?? Oo! Random! I had my suspicions ^^.

Erm erm erm...their phone conversation was...diverse? ^^.

I can't really think of what else to comment on in this chapter and I'm exhausted (and it's only half 4- IN THE AFTERNOON THIS TIME!) so I'll keep reviewage brief.

Oh, and whilst I've got the chance, I'll take this space to say that Facebook takes FOREVER to respond on and it annoys me, so unless it's urgent or bleh, then it's probably best just to e-mail or msn or stuff.

Anyways! Love it so far! Update soon!
IrishCarBomb
2008-04-29
ch 2,
abuseHaha loved the phone conversation, looking forward to more.
Quintessence-x
2008-04-29
ch 2,
abuseI can't believe how underapprieciated you are! It makes me want to go slap random people on the street.

Hehe.
I loved their little phone conversation! I'm all extra excited to see how this progresses! WRITE MORE! NOW!

Blarghh... I'm sorry for this suckish review... a couple hours of doing homework temporarily fries my brain xD

Update!!
Dust Mowt
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseOo! Texty speak! Most intriguing!

And asian/ latino? Oo! Odd combination! I wonder how that'll pan out!

What was the relevance of the dust particle? Or was it just implying the lack of any interesting inter-action between the two characters? If it had relevance, I'd be interested to know (I find small things mentally stimulating- and yes, that was deliberately phrased to read like suggestive filth). Comme moi.

I await any updates on this! I would read more of your work but...it's gone 2 in the morning and I have school tomorrow...or in fact, later today. Shizer! Nighty night! Nice story!
Quintessence-x
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseYay!
This sounds like it's going to get interesting! I loved the conversation! xD

I hope there's more soon!
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