Reviews for Quiet Fatigue - FictionPress.com

simpleplan13 2008-05-16 ch 1,	abuseI love how you do the capitalization with the grammar. You dont do that in some of your pieces and I really thing it helps a lot with the flow. The piece is interesting... I like the word choice a lot and the descriptions fit really well. The whole idea of a quiet fatigue is an interesting take on basically feeling sad/depressed. Nice done.
ode to melancholy 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abuseO_o This is... I relate to it. Not really the crying (I'm hopeless at crying, although the overwhelming feeling to weep seems to come at the most inappropriate moments; holding back tears in company while looking casual is something of an art), but... Well. "But I'm gone and I don't know quite where." That, I think, is the summary of my life nowadays. Very powerful (in a simple way, if that makes sense).
Faith Adeline 2008-04-27 ch 1,	abuseI like this. very good, solid piece :) Faith
molotovcocktailontherocks 2008-04-27 ch 1,	abuseI really like this. Well written and easy to relate to.