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| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abusei know who Adonis is, but who is Ixion? i've never heard of him and i know a hell of a lot about Greek myths, especially concerning the Underworld and Hades. |
| Munchkin!! ^^ 2008-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey there again! Sigh...you write da best fanfics! *huggles you* Great job again! ^^ |
| Sebastian Osprey 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI like your descriptions of Persephone; they fit her perfectly. Honestly, though, the more I read into Greek myths, the more I find myself taking Hades' side. I can't wait to hear more from you! Osprey |
| Audrey T. 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseNicely written. I love mythology and you did the story justice. |
| Lauren 2008-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou did a very good job with writing this, however, in the actual myth of Hades and Persephone it doesn't say she was reluctant after she ate the pomegranate seeds. She grew to care for Hades and became a strong, wise, and powerful Queen. But other than that, it was nicely written. |
| Wren Silver 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI like it. You explained it all really well, and you have good grammar. ~Wren Silver |
| Ann Gry 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. It's been a while since I read up on Greek mythology but there are some things I still remember, and I liked the way you tied these details in. I particularly liked how you described Hades' appearance. |