I love your writing.
And I especially love this.
It'd be awesome if you made this some sort of short story, but it's obviously a one-shot/ birthday thing and -now that I think about it- it's really good as it is.
Anyhoo, I'm off to read more of your stuff.:D

hilarious. dude. friggin excellence. =D

It reminds me of Haruhi Suzumiya in all the right ways. I really like how you manage to convey Ryan's dorky pathetic-ness in such an endearing fashion.

I laughed really loudly when I read this in the library.

Keep up the good work.

-Schyzotypal X

Samantha/Miranda/Tess sounds like the coolest person I've ever met!
Honestly :) She's so awesome. And Ryan - well, yes. She is beautiful in her own dysfunctional way, and you should fall in love with her :P
Update soon!
Holly
:)

ohmigosh.
this was so so so precious. :D

this kind of reminds me of a relationship i have with a guy at school, though I'm more of a Ryan type and he's more of a Tess/Miranda...yeah. he's odd, but i love him. XD

once again, you dazzle with all your true genius. i applaud thee.

I love this. My name is Tessa, and really, I'm kind of like her, only I'll never be a Miranda. Still, eating odd things, calling people by even odder names, and drawing like no other. I love it. Thank you. I also know a guy named Ryan who has commented on my own artwork and I know a girl named Candy who is a **. How odd ... I'd love to see more out of this. Also, Ben is my classmate, a friend of my friend Ryan, and also my boss's son. Irony.

I like it. Very fresh breath of air ... very new writing, and I hope you never read any of the old FP writings to get ideas. O_O

Wow, really great story. At first, with the summary, I was like, 'eh, what the heck...' But the story is really great and original. I liked it a lot. If it's a one-shot, that's cool, if you continue, that's even better. ;-)

This was seriously amazing. I don't know which I loved more, the fact that she called him "Excalibur" or the fact that she eats raw sugar. Which admittedly made me cringe a little. Reminds me of a tricked out version of Ally Sheedy on The Breakfast Club. Only a much cooler one.

Terrific job. Loved it!

This is so god! Please continue (if you're gonna?) Very funny and cute.

How fun.
I like it. Its a little disjointed, but it fits the characters.
Hope you continue.

Wow. I don't really know what to say, I'n not so good at reviews, but I really like this... and I hope that Candy has a big role (and not just as a bad person). Mainly 'cause I like the name.

i like how odd the characters are.

wow. I like this. The way you write is really interesting that everything flows and makes sense and just seems perfect. Not to mention I like the story so far in general. Update soon(:
- Airi