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| -Cherry'd 2008-08-08 ch 1, | abuseWow, really great story. At first, with the summary, I was like, 'eh, what the heck...' But the story is really great and original. I liked it a lot. If it's a one-shot, that's cool, if you continue, that's even better. ;-) |
| Abstractamundo 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was seriously amazing. I don't know which I loved more, the fact that she called him "Excalibur" or the fact that she eats raw sugar. Which admittedly made me cringe a little. Reminds me of a tricked out version of Ally Sheedy on The Breakfast Club. Only a much cooler one. Terrific job. Loved it! |
| VanillaMostly 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is so god! Please continue (if you're gonna?) Very funny and cute. |
| pepsi-fiend007 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseHow fun. I like it. Its a little disjointed, but it fits the characters. Hope you continue. |
| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. I don't really know what to say, I'n not so good at reviews, but I really like this... and I hope that Candy has a big role (and not just as a bad person). Mainly 'cause I like the name. |
| Trishcbury 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusei like how odd the characters are. |
| controlledinsanity 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusewow. I like this. The way you write is really interesting that everything flows and makes sense and just seems perfect. Not to mention I like the story so far in general. Update soon(: - Airi |