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arrhythmias 6/19/11 . chapter 1oh, this is a thousand shades of brilliance and sadness and it broke my heart in the best way. 'You whisper to me,/ "I want to die. Kill me."'/ But I don't have to./ You're already killing yourself.' |
punctured.lungs 6/12/11 . chapter 1This is powerful. |
happyharper13 4/27/08 . chapter 1Wow. That's so sad, but you do a good job of not hitting your readers over the head with the sadness. The ending is pithy but not cliched, and altogether very real. It hits hard. Good job. |
theangrylibrarian 4/27/08 . chapter 1wow this is really good. i really like the flow of this poem, how it goes from high to low just like the drug. |
Shasta Valentine 4/27/08 . chapter 1dramatically beautiful. -sv |
East-0f-Eden 4/27/08 . chapter 1brilliant and clearly expresses your emotions. |