oh, this is a thousand shades of brilliance and sadness and it broke my heart in the best way.

'You whisper to me,/ "I want to die. Kill me."'/ But I don't have to./ You're already killing yourself.'

This is powerful.

Wow. That's so sad, but you do a good job of not hitting your readers over the head with the sadness. The ending is pithy but not cliched, and altogether very real. It hits hard. Good job.

wow this is really good. i really like the flow of this poem, how it goes from high to low just like the drug.

dramatically beautiful.

-sv

brilliant and clearly expresses your emotions.