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| happyharper13 2008-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseWow. That's so sad, but you do a good job of not hitting your readers over the head with the sadness. The ending is pithy but not cliched, and altogether very real. It hits hard. Good job. |
| theangrylibrarian 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusewow this is really good. i really like the flow of this poem, how it goes from high to low just like the drug. |
| Shasta Valentine 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusedramatically beautiful. -sv |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusebrilliant and clearly expresses your emotions. |