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Reviews For: Not The Battle of Delykin

The Revolution's Child
2008-07-11
ch 1,
abuseWow. That was very funny.
Cupid's Jinx
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuse-giggle-
That. Was cool.
he he
blackberrydream
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abusethat was really funny. I love all the random and convenient abilities Hoi had, very creative.
The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseThat was SO random ... and ONE MOLECULE CAN'T DIFFUSE! ... Sorry, I'm a science dork, but that sorry was great! I LOVED the opening and closing about that random guy reading the story, but I wish you, like, put it in italics or something. Great job!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon
PS: I TOTALLY have to add this to my C2!
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