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| The Revolution's Child 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was very funny. |
| Cupid's Jinx 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuse-giggle- That. Was cool. he he |
| blackberrydream 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abusethat was really funny. I love all the random and convenient abilities Hoi had, very creative. |
| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was SO random ... and ONE MOLECULE CAN'T DIFFUSE! ... Sorry, I'm a science dork, but that sorry was great! I LOVED the opening and closing about that random guy reading the story, but I wish you, like, put it in italics or something. Great job! Write on! Pen.Dragon PS: I TOTALLY have to add this to my C2! |