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Reviews For: Dragon's Eyes

Katsaya
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abuseThis is a wonderful poem, I really enjoed it and I hope you enjoy your new spot in my favs:)
dragonflydreamer
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseThis is a lovely poem. I like the flow; once I started reading, it had me hooked and it kept me moving steadily and smoothly throught the poem. Your rhyme is also quite nice. It never felt forced and it really added to the piece. The repition, as well, was nice touch. I honestly can't think of any good concrit to give. You did a wonderful job with this poem!
addicted2storiz
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuseI have a little sibling too, so I can definitely say that I've had the similar thoughts. Your poem was quite lovely and I loved the "magic-story" references; essentially you wrote about escaping reality into a better more naive and simpler world of fiction/youth in the format of a fairy tale. Great job!
Squidy
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuseFirst of all, your icon made me smile. :D

...and back on topic now. I love the repitition of "gazing into a dragon's eyes" and just...yeah. I think this came together really well.
Morbid Mind
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseSiempre llegué a identificarme con los dragones...
Simplemente me encantó...
Princess-anna57
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseI agree with your summary :) Cool poem. Keep writing and thanks!

~Anna~ ^_^
East-0f-Eden
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abusenice rhyme scheme. descriptive too.
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