Great story! I'd love to read another chapter if you write more. I know some might think it's been done one too many times, but I'd really love to read more into it!

Great story! Keep up the great work!

Wow. That's really intense-- really powerful. The last line is totally fabulous. My only criticism is their descriptions are bit-- overdone's the wrong word, but the right one's not coming to me... But really good.

The last line gave me shivers, don't change it.

On a side note, at the beginning of the story I was like "whoa, RandoMaia is writing about men!" Then it went on and it turned out they were gay. Figures! =P

Great story! So much emotion!

Also, I think your ending could do better. It doesn't stir enough emotion in me. Either write more, or end it better.

Other than that, awesome!

~cheerio

This was kind of interesting. It seems like Eric got HIV or something like that and that's what the letter said. That's why Trey says he's positive, right? I dunno. Maybe you should make it more clear what the letter actually says. I thought it was interesting though. I never read male/male stories or oneshots, but this one was actually good. =]

Needs more sex.

Aside? Awesome.

Oh. That is really good. I wanna know what the letter said. I love it though, really emotional.