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| Lexi Matthews 2008-09-10 ch 1,  | abuseAnother great job. You really have a talent for writing! |
| .following.black.doves. 2008-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWow! I loved it :) the flow & the rhyming was great, too. ^-^ sara x. |
| Take the Money and Run 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. I loved that. A lot. It's like, the sensation you get when you're with him, right? I love how you describe everything, the flow of the poem, the way it's written, the punctuation is done well, and the rhyming adds to it nicely. You could separate it into four-line stanzas, but its also fine the way it is. I also really like the line "A drop of your potion into my eyes." The way it ends is really nice, too. Amazing job on this! |
| molotovcocktailontherocks 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was strange, not bad, just strange. I don't really understand what just happened. O_O |