Reviews for Still Swimming - FictionPress.com

Rock Music is my Muse 2008-05-03 ch 1,	abuseI like it. It's original, and even though not much is happening it holds the reader's interest and says a lot. --Alex
Lola 2008-05-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really, really liked how girl is telling all her problems to a fish and how the city makes her feel. It's fab and shows how disconnected people are in the modern age. Girl is surrounded by all these people in this large city, yet she feels most comfortable revealing her secrets and insecurities to a fish. Things that can be improved: The first time lapse that you have isn't nessecary. Also, I don't think Mark really fit into the scene eiher. His presence was a bit out of place. And the knife for the fish seemed a bit out there too. I don't want to tell you how to write your play, but I think that she should try to pour the fish down the drain or something instead. I don't think most people would try to stab a fish (Those buggers can swim fast) and it's not buyable. But I think pouring down the drain would be good. Good luck with your writing. It's a fab start!
Tara Brookswell 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abuseGood idea, great flow. Really loved it. Mr. Giggles is awesome.
Zo Lyon 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is amazing. Please continue it. I hope to see it on the stage someday!