Good luck getting published. Your gonna need it. Your grammar sucks, your plot lines make no sense half the time, and you have no idea what the process of getting published is.

So many authors are leaving due to plagiarism. It is terrible. I truly enjoyed this story and I am sad to see you and it go.

This story is good(:
i hope your publishing succeeds! :D

I will definently miss this story! Please please (don't mean to whine) please, finish PBP before you take it down. I'm running out of good stories to read, lol. You said that you probably wouldn't be posting unto to FP anymore, but are you considering any other writing sites? If so please msg me, cuz I'd love to be able to continue following your work. Best of luck!

-dramalover21

I read both verisons..even though i was kinda ** off she didnt end up with araon in the first one, this one made both for it. Dont get me wrong both verions were completely amazing, im just happy, they finally ended up together. I mean it took them long enough lol [= But yeah your an amazing writing, both your stories just made my day~

"And, you might want to tell your beloved Sam it’s rude to eavesdrop"
hahah~ that's so funny~~
where is Morgan?
There's no Aaron...but there's Jacelyn=)

=O
Aaron is insane!!
haha~

Aw... what a sad chapter...
sometimes lies are not that bad if the intentions are good...
Jacelyn is a nice demon!=)

Aaron's not dying...
what about Jacelyn??
i like the fork too=)
though Jacelyn's struggling with them= =
MY FIREBALL SHOULD KICK HIS **!!

what a big mouth Jacelyn~
haha~ i like that part!

=)review here!
a demon who controlled fire!!
i love it=)

OMG i am frikin crying. i havnt cried this much ova n fp story in a long tyme. Wow this story was reli amazing. Absolutly amazing.Great work. I luv there hole relationship. nd how aaron finalli admittd he luvd her:)

O this seems interesting so far

Pure genius! :'] I love this story and the ending was good. Im a more tragic person and would've liked it if they were forever separated, but that's to harsh! Lol! The endings perfect though :]
The beginning was iffy, but THANK GOD I PUSHED MYSELF TO READ THIS :D Seriously, this storys great :D

Hey, guess what? I'm reviewing! Aren't I just amazing? This is going to be super-duper long because I totally owe you for my abysmal tardiness in reviewing this story.

I just want to say that i LOVED the end of this. I think it is quite perfect. There is something that has definitely changed about the way you wrote this and the way you wrote the first version... The rewrite is darker, with more powerful and seriously thought provoking words and those questions that you would randomly toss at me. I swear...some of the chapters in here messed with my brain more than the TV show LOST. And LOST is a serious mind**. (pardon my language...) Especially when you skip a whole season and trying to watch a new episode and your brain starts to leak out your ears from the strain of trying to figure ** out.

But anyway. Continuing on. I think my favorite part of the end was when Aaron was talking to Samantha's grave...it was quite a powerful scene. I loved it. (My favorite part of the whole story I think will remain the scene where Aaron was messing with her brain and she was holding the gun to her head. I forgot what chapter that was. But you know what I'm talking about) And I will be shocked if you send this to a publisher and you don't immediately get an offer for it.

And you know that when it gets published you're going to have to put me in your dedication...cause you KNOW that you're going in mine. :)

Writing is definitely something you have seriously gotten much more crazy awesome over the years and I can't wait to read more of what you come up with. (I wish I had the time and flexibility to work on my writing so that it could maybe possibly have a chance at competing with yours.)

Okay. I've run out of things to really say without repeating myself like a fogey old person.

...I think this review warrants a phone call, don't you? C: