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| hyperfuzzy 2008-04-28 ch 2,  | abusewas the radiation deflected by lead paint? |
| Eilinora 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseUsing mental disorders to make your character sound interesting? Lame. Just like the rest of this story. |
| bulletcereal 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abusehm, i wonder what will happen. and how did this happen. i like having questions to ask. oh and dont answer any of them unless in the story. oh crap, im like a back seat writer. |
| bulletcereal 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abusesounds good so far. yes a smart person will always do. I've always thought about what would happen if I was trapped in a school, but this is basically it. except, I'm not a girl. |
| Keihkono 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWhat I want to know is how the school is still standing during an apocalypse lololol But putting that aside, it's really interesting so far and I want to know what happens next. I'm a real sucker for post-apocalyptic worlds and so far this looks good. Keep it up! |
| ByTheMoonlight 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseIt seems like you have a very good start. Is this the end of the story and the rest is left to our imaginations or do you plan to continue it? Either way, it's a very good idea and I will surely read on if you continue. ^-^ |