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| Maircus 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI am and always will be the better one of “us”. - I believe this is an understatement. good job! =) -m |
| perpetual questions 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusenice imagery in 'smile into the face of that burning sun'. melancholy and detailed, not bad. emotion is well conveyed. 'for moister to wet' --should be 'moisture', i believe. -adrian |