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Maircus
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abuseI am and always will be
the better one of “us”. - I believe this is an understatement. good job! =)
-m
perpetual questions
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abusenice imagery in 'smile into the face of that burning sun'. melancholy and detailed, not bad. emotion is well conveyed.

'for moister to wet' --should be 'moisture', i believe.

-adrian
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