This is really, really powerful. I almost started crying (and I'm not one to cry while reading.)This is an absolutely fantastic piece of work. I wish more people could see the genius you've created. It flowed so well and it all felt so realistic. Thank you SO much for taking the time to share this. Absolutely beautiful.

Wow, tragedy at it's greatest. It was sad, but I liked it a lot.

This got to me, it got my attention on the deepest level. Really touching, sad and overall really awesome.

it is very good

why did you kill her? she was so beautiful.