 Faith Adeline 2008-06-20 . chapter 6The last line is great, very good. Overall, nice piece :)
Faith |
 thursdays and rain 2008-06-20 . chapter 5Sometimes I also feel like this.. This is really a wonderful collection.. Since you've been really nice to me, I figured I'd review the whole thing.. Anyways, thank you so much for the critiques.. I'm really grateful and I really appreciate it..
Hearts to you,
~♥Tiara |
 thursdays and rain 2008-06-20 . chapter 4This has a light feel to it.. Nicely done.. |
 thursdays and rain 2008-06-20 . chapter 3"we sweetly dream" - love those lines.. and the whole thing.. |
 thursdays and rain 2008-06-20 . chapter 2Aw, so sweet.. |
 thursdays and rain 2008-06-20 . chapter 1I'm not sure what you would have liked to convey in this piece but still, it's a nice read ;) |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2008-05-08 . chapter 1Oh, cool idea. :) I used to do the daily poetry contests on poetry dot com, both their "magnetic poetry" one and the haiku one; it's a great way to get something creative flowing. Plus, this is just awesome. Very pretty. Keep writing! :) |
 Nemonus 2008-05-07 . chapter 4What an interesting concept. These are beautiful snippets, if sometimes too short--they're like M&Ms, each one a little bit of chocolate deliciousness. |
 Ashelin 2008-04-27 . chapter 1It's interesting going backwards, because each poem becomes smaller. I like it this way though. Perhaps I'm simply ridiculous. No, I know I am. There is nothing "perhaps" about it. I like the imagery in this. It means what I make it to mean, but it's still good. |
 Ashelin 2008-04-27 . chapter 2I can definately relate to this when thinking of February. Funny how so few words can make up an entire month. |
 Ashelin 2008-04-27 . chapter 3This definately causes an array of emotions. I like that you can find poetry in even the most limited of words. Or even finding poetry in someone elses words, as if they aren't your own but you can make them so. Good job. |
 Ashelin 2008-04-27 . chapter 4These are short, but so it goes when you have limited words to work with. I really liked the fourth line. I think I'll review these backwards. |
 East-0f-Eden 2008-04-27 . chapter 2lol |