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| mybrokenending 2008-05-10 ch 11,  | abuseWoah. I was not expecting the whole immortal thing. At all. This is an interesting story and I really love Cici and Kevin, and I don't even know why. Awesome job so far. |
| Zapto369 -2- 2008-05-09 ch 11, | abuseWow! Very nice! |
| Zapto369 -2- 2008-05-09 ch 10, | abuseI knew it! Immortal, awesome! |
| MySunshine 2008-05-09 ch 10, | abusehuh, immortal? that's unexpected xD it's funny that cecilia doesn't even use abbreviations, like 'don't', instead she says do not x) just something random i noticed i'm sure i've said it a thousand times before, but i love kevin and cecilia ^^ they're so cute~ and i love kevin for 'paying attention' to her. but ... i really did not expect something like this ^^ was her father immortal, too, or something? i wonder how he'll react *laughing fit* somehow, i think he'll be cracking up secretly ... hope you continue soon! ;) |
| MySunshine 2008-05-09 ch 9, | abuseoh my, that was sad ... nice to have something from her mother to read. she sounds really sad and nostalgic ... i liked this chapter ^^ |
| kIng RICHARD the tHird 2008-05-09 ch 10, anon. | abuseooh, immortal. Didn't see that coming. |
| mybrokenending 2008-05-08 ch 8, | abuseThis intrigues me. I love how they are short entries, but I’m not sure if I’m going to understand enough about the characters unless you make the story 80 chapters long. I would love to see a longer chapter from you. It’d definitely be interesting. I like it so far though – a lot. Lots of love and keep writing, MBE. |
| Kaizykat 2008-05-08 ch 8, | abuseI like this story. It's very intresting. I'm wondering what Cecilia's mom is like. |
| MySunshine 2008-05-08 ch 8, | abusejeez, you upload fast xD haha, and I wonder, what his teacher would say if s/he collected his notebook and read it *laughing fit* ugh, i never understood the differences between noun and pronoun and whatever. they keep confusing me -.- cute how interested in her he is ^^ he seems to watch her the whole time xD hope you continue soon - or will you upload today again? ;) |
| MySunshine 2008-05-08 ch 7, | abusewoah, she did move a lot ... they must have a lot of money xD so ... sounds like she's feeling a little sad. and invisible. well, kevin noticed her because he's a nice guy and because he obviously is interested in her ^^ nice chapter, although i'd kiss your feet if you'd make the chapters a little, tiny bit longer ;) |
| Zapto369 -2- 2008-05-08 ch 7, | abuseWow it's getting interesting now. But I think your math is a little off. If she's sixteen, there's no way she could have lived in all those places for about ten years each! |
| Zapto369 -2- 2008-05-07 ch 6, | abuseInteresting... |
| Zapto369 -2- 2008-05-07 ch 4, | abuseHinkle, that's a funny name, ha! |
| MySunshine 2008-05-06 ch 6, | abusecute ^^ i don't know emily dickenson either. i've heard of her, i think -.-" i wonder what she meant by her last sentence ... well, as i already said, it's nice to read a story that's totally different from others, and i hope you continue soon ;) |
| MySunshine 2008-05-06 ch 5, | abusehuh. doesn't kevin have anything to go? and how did he manage to write down the call? o.0 your writing style is definitely interesting. a lot shorter than other stories, but an interesting new experience ^^ |