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| hypa to hell and back 2008-08-23 ch 11,  | abusehehe i smiled at you this good up date up date |
| LondonLi 2008-08-12 ch 11, anon. | abuseWhy would he play with Keri like that though? I still don't like it! But thanks for the update! |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-08-11 ch 11, | abuseOMG! I LOVE IT! ITS VERY FUNNY! UPDATE ASAP! |
| Izzey 2008-08-10 ch 11, | abusewow. how did he know she'd be there?? did she tell him?? wow. please update again as soon as you can |
| Evil lil angel 2008-08-10 ch 11, | abuseI love it!! Shane and layla are crazy and dun dun dun ren and layla are in spain then all the sudden shane shows up wit keri... Tee hee hee what a stalker.. Lol jk... Update soon! Can't wait to see what happens... |
| Writing4Eternity 2008-08-10 ch 11, | abuseI love this. However, it's a bit unrealistic to go to spain in the middle of the semester. |
| xoxo.Starless.Skies.xoxo 2008-08-10 ch 11, | abuseThis is such an amazing story...oh my god seriously the best thing I've read in a really, really, really, really long time. i don't usually like third person but you did so well with the realistic words and you made it so personal (I usually worry that third person is distant) that I didn't even care that it was 3rd person...Thank you for writing something this good! |
| N.M.E 2008-08-10 ch 11, | abuseOMG! OH MY GOD! This is so major. Man, he must like her a lot! Ha ha! I can't wait for Ren's reaction. And Keri! He's using her! That's so bad. If Layla finds out about this Shane is a goner. Update soon. |
| Sportgirlpower10 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abusenice (= |
| The Silverdark Knight 2008-07-29 ch 10, | abuseHA! The best way to end a chapter should always be: "WTF?!" Nice chapter, by the way. It is surprising just how much the male mind can ponder their own emotions. So Shane came out alright. And the bit where Shane said "where's the Brianna who likes to talk about herself" was hilarious. Classic. What was that saying, "Out of the mouth of babes flies the truth"? Good work with Jake. |
| Writing4Eternity 2008-07-27 ch 10, | abuseI absolutely love this |
| happy ever afterxx 2008-07-27 ch 10, | abuseI love your story! More soon? x |
| AllSpark 2008-07-27 ch 10, | abuseWhoa some of a load to pull for poor Shane and I don't think Layla has a clue about how she's feeling for him. Then there's Ren, walking up to her and kissing her, that makes me wonder, will she kiss back in the next chapter or push him away? Well, please update soon, I can't wait to hear what will happen next. |
| dreamcatcher93 2008-07-26 ch 10, | abuseAwe so Shane's finally realised he's in lurvee! :)) Wonder whats gonna happen next... Update soon!! Lovin the way this is heading!! ~Aditi |
| Izzey 2008-07-26 ch 10, | abuseomg he so loves her. and he's only just realising it? omg he's so stupid. but then again, he is a guy, so i shouldn't have expected anything less. lol. anyways, please update again soon |