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| SEMMU 2008-06-15 ch 1,  | abuseAgain, well done. I seem to be the grandpa in these here parts, but I can remember being in school. Your descriptive details apply to almost every university and/or college I ever visited in my drunken undergrad days. As a result, you've found a nice common experience and topic that hasn't been explored often enough. Congrats on painting a horrific, but dear to my heart, picture. I learned much while staggering around a keg. |
| les petits bateaux 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseOh how I love this - I love your take on this and the idea you've got here. Your descriptions are satirical and I love the language that you've used. "Dominating trampled landscape / In their vibrant red plasticity." Adore it. |