This is interesting, I haven't seen a story like this before...Please update soon!

Its been a while since I've had so much fun with a character. :D
Samael's great. gotta love him.

Amazing. Amazing! This story absolutely thrills me to no end. It's like a music box - haunting but beautifully written. Ever watched the show Dexter? Never watched it myself, but there are commercials that completely reflects the mood of Samael. Cannot wait for the upcoming chapters! Is Gabriel supposed to represent Sam's counterpart? Sam called himself the devil and Gabriel an angel, afterall... Ah, I'm left to wonder. Thank you for the amazing read!

I'm really glad you decided to continue this! I read the first chapter a while ago and was really intrigued by it. I can't wait to read more and find out about this Gabriel person!!

wow.. twisted dream... I LOVED IT!

THis is weird, different, and quite unlike (in plot and writing style) to anything I've read in the past.

I LIKIE!

I'm only halfway through the chapter atm, but it strikes me that Samael is a bit...robotic. His sentences are very short and factual. And I'm laughing already because I misread having written 'robotic' myself for 'erotic' *wipes tears from eyes* Oh I am a one...

"the old biscuit" xD!! What a phrase.

I SPOT A MISTAKE! "My brain is likes"!

How does Samael know his own eyes are brown? It's first person, yeah? Then the only things we can see are what he sees, so we can't see the colour of his eyes :).

I love his sensory detections, whatever those are. I think I mean that I like it when he can smell the voices on people. Oh, it's good shit this.

But Gucci Pour Homme II is crap. Get some Versache darling. Be a real man.

How do shoes sound important?

The collective staff seem to say 'like' a lot. That's not even a criticism, that's just me being observant. I love myself.

Personally, if I was the man with the cigarette, I'd be like...'wtf?'...but seeing as I've just read on and he puts his hand on Samael's thigh, it seems he was after something anyway. How louche.

As nice as it is to use lines like "When the moon peeks out again, we're both gone" to suggest what's just happened...in a first person perspective, it's not really possible. or maybe it is, it's hard to say. But it seems a bit risque.

After all that I've just read, I stand by what I said earlier: Samael comes across as robotic. He kind of lacks a bit of humanity. Oh I feel clever now.

Anyway, this is really well written sweetie, and a good read. I think it'll become an even better read as I read on. Otherwise, tschuss for now.

I'm still in love with this.
That's all I can say.
Please update, you're amazing, Ily.

Seen Dark Knight twice so far, and the second time was even better! On a more focused note: I love this story. Im already oddly cheering for and entirely creeped out by this character (just the Joker!) Cant wait to see how this turns out!

OMG I just realized why the name Samael seemed so damn familiar. He's the Accuser, the Seducer, and the Destroyer. Classified as both good and evil. I read about him when I was reading up on demonology for a few stories last year. His name literally means Poison of God. That has been bugging me sense I saw the story. YEAH. It explains so much about this story now. Sorry ranting I know, I'm just so glad I figured out why the name was so familiar. Okay update soon.

Very good story. Very good grammar and spelling, and I don't get to write that often. Very well written to, draws you right into the story. Can't wait to read more.

Ooh, I love the way you write things. And it was all so very suspenseful... even him snapping the pencils gave me chills. One thing for this story, though, is that you definitely have to be in the mood for it. It's not quite as good a read when life is all rainbows and puppy dogs. But, at other times, I think it is absolutely brilliant. Am looking forward to more.

I don't think I've blinked in the last ten minutes I've been reading this story. I can't wait for an update!
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I'm giggling. I don't think I should be. I can't help it.
I loves it!

I love Sam...

I freaking love that serial killer (Sam the Serial killer man). Love him.