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dorome 2009-11-25 . chapter 15
Yeah! Thank you. I wasn't sure anymore if it would happen.
Raiya-shi 2009-11-25 . chapter 15
D= Sosad! >.< I loved Reed! >.> but since the ch ended that way with Kay and Todd... *fangasms* =D keep up the amazing work ^-^ thanx for the update!
dorome 2009-11-20 . chapter 14
OMG - He did not jump, did he? Please not. That would be really bad.
Otherwise it was a real intense chapter. I liked how he opened up to Reed a little. And I still hope he and Todd get together some how.
Terinu14 2009-11-19 . chapter 14
Oh my gosh, best chapter so far! Please don't let Kay die! DX I will cry! This isn't the end right? It was getting so good! Anyway, great job and keep up the good work. ^_^
plumblossom 2009-11-14 . chapter 13
I do not trust Reed. Am I supposed to trust Reed?
Werwolf234 2009-11-14 . chapter 13
Awesome story so far! Can't wait for you to update!

~Raven
xanthofile 2009-11-13 . chapter 13
i'd forgotten this part of the story, so it's either an addition or my memory is for crap. i don't doubt the latter a bit. ::laughs:: still really enjoy reading this, you know.
lalaland22 2009-11-12 . chapter 12
I love that in the beginning you didn't make it so obvvious that Kay might fall for Todd with all the over descriptions. Kudos!

I really like Reed but its kind of obvious that he might turn into that cliche side guy who is only there as a substitue, but will eventually get hurt in the end. I really hope that doesn't happen b/c this story is so original and I'm absolutley loving it.

Update soon!...or i'll go crazy,jk
Kreeper 2009-11-10 . chapter 8
I'm absolutely in love with this!! It's the perfect story in my world: makes my heart wrench in the best possible way. The writing is amazing. All the stories in my head are like this, but they never come out as well on paper or in text. I love Todd's character.

And I feel ya on the reviews. It's disappointing when you spend the time making and posting stories only to not get any feedback. But hey, you've got a crapload more of 'em than I do, so props to you, my friend.

Seriously, this shit's awesome.
JtheChosen1 2009-11-10 . chapter 12
Very nice work!
Raiya-shi 2009-11-10 . chapter 12
Thanks for the update! *puts Kay in a straight jacket* Awesome work! *holds out cookie* Cyber cookie?
dorome 2009-11-03 . chapter 11
Only drama and angst. I hoped for more comfort... So please let it get better soon.
Raiya-shi 2009-11-03 . chapter 10
LOVE your story! Keep up the amazing work ^-^
JtheChosen1 2009-10-30 . chapter 10
Super intense as always! Love your updates!
dorome 2009-10-30 . chapter 10
Oh my, and i so hoped Kay and Todd will come together. Either you are very good at building up tension and misunterstandinfg between your charaters or i have no idea where this is going. None the less i hope for the first and that Todd and Kay talk about their feelings (wich i hope are mutual) soon. Anyway it is fascinating.
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