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| hello-smudge 2008-08-20 ch 1,  | abuseokay, this is my first ever review. ever. i'm currently up to chapter 5 and i'm loving it. i love the vunerability of the main character. the way its so sick and twisted and crazy but i keep wanting more. -- check out my story sometime i mean. if mm romance/humour is your thing. great work! |
| Painted Desert 2008-06-29 ch 8, | abuseHope you continue this soon. I'm enjoying it. |
| Terinu14 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseAwesome read. I love this story. Wonderful writing. Keep up the great work. ^_~ |
| SerialXLain 2008-06-19 ch 8, | abuseTodd's kind of a dweeb. I like it. Makes me like him more. As for What'shisname... I think he needs some Prozac, the poor little dude. And a nice big hug. (And in regards to your AN... Reviewers do seem to be mysteriously disappearing lately...) |
| CaFFy 2008-06-16 ch 8, | abuse>>;; Whine whine. lol |
| lgdfmhkcm 2008-06-14 ch 8, anon. | abusey doesnt he like reed?? =// |
| SerialXLain 2008-06-11 ch 7, | abuseCongrats on graduating. :D (Your AN made me paranoid. I'm not the one whining am I!? ._.) "Todd flashed his badge" AHAHA. I read that as "flashed his bulge." :cough: Aw, he ate for him. :) |
| Thread of Life 2008-06-11 ch 7, | abuseI like the fact that he cooks sometimes. I don't know why haha. I'm thinking that in some alternate dimension where he is happy he lives on being a cook. And congrats on graduating! |
| CaFFy 2008-06-08 ch 7, | abuseTheres an ad about graduation on top of this page for me. lol and then I read you graduated o-o; CONGRATS I got half a month left. Who be the man!? |
| SerialXLain 2008-06-06 ch 6, | abuseI really really like Todd. He's just too nice. o.o Aw. He wanted to see the stars, right? D: |
| SerialXLain 2008-06-06 ch 5, | abuseAw. Todd's so nice. And again...: Poor WhateverHisNameIs. (Dude my reviews are lame. Sorry.) |
| SerialXLain 2008-06-06 ch 4, | abuse"The apartment was nice. It was big, like he said, and my room was a nice size. He’d gotten it all set up for me, nice bed, a dresser, night stand…it was nice." (Not sure if that was intentional...but he said nice three times in one paragraph and then said it again after Todd asked if he liked it. Nice is kind of...a blah word.) Aw. Once again... Poor WhateverHisNameIs. |
| SerialXLain 2008-06-06 ch 3, | abuseOh damn. I almost threw up at the Reeses part. I guess that's good for you since you made it vivid enough for me to imagine the disgustingness of peanut butter...but nasty. “I don’t think the stores here carry ‘fucking twig’ but I’ll check,” Haha. CaFFy was reading that awhile ago and sent it to me. I loled then and only smiled this time. :P |
| SerialXLain 2008-06-06 ch 2, | abuseAw. Poor...whatever...his name is. That'd be so weird not even remembering your name or the year or anything. o.o |
| SerialXLain 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseDude. Strong beginning, man. And it IS indeed depressing. I've been wanting to read this for awhile so it's nice to finally be reading it... :) Can't wait to see where it goes from here. o.o xo |