That's pretty good. I enjoyed it.

I like this, it's so descriptive, a flowing stream of consciousness. "where the world will become pure noise again" - I know exactly how that is.

great work!

I loved it. It's got a dreamy quality about it that I just can't resist. I love that kind of tone in a story.

very descriptive and very pretty.

This is beautiful. I really like it. It's so gracefully written. I know exactly what you mean, too.