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Thermite
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseHmm...that's basic human instinct, isn't it? To be wanted, cared for, loved. Some people want it more than others, but most need it more than actually want it...hmm...a certain song by Chris Daughtry comes to mind when I read this. This would be much easier to read into if I knew where you were coming from. But personally, I think you have it worse than me. Excellent, thought-provoking piece.

Thermite
.mate.feed.kill.repeat.
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseOf course I WANT you, you ** retard! I might have to send Hannah and Leia after you and turn YOU lesbian instead of me!

I think you could've made this into more stanzas but now that I think of it I'm not reallky sure how... so nevermind.

i love you, want you, need you, can't breathe with out you. so stop being an idiot & say you love me too.
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