Reviews for Are we on the same page?

Nemonus 2008-05-07 ch 1,	abuseClever! I don't know that I've ever seen backwards typing done before. Although I'm not a fan of odd formatting, I like the squished-together middle stanza because it almost indicates a shyness, an unwillingness to do anything except wish for 'the pages to be pushed together'. Great imagery and creative twist on a love poem.
Aslan Israel 2008-05-02 ch 1,	abuseThat's such a poetic thought... it's so beautiful. And I like how you used the format to bring it to life. Brava.
perpetual questions 2008-04-28 ch 1,	abuseinteresting thought, and also interesting with the last line. to me it kind of seems incomplete as a poem though. -adrian