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blackroxduh17 2009-11-22 . chapter 23
AW! When will you update? Im gonna hunt you down and... beg for another chapter! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE with Oliver on top!!
strawberrycrush 2009-11-22 . chapter 24
Epic...!
Awesome..
Lovely
Beautifully written
Am rendered speechless...!


Ps-dint understand one thing...what did Sydney exactly do wid her hair...??

Update fast
Zesty-Tomato 2009-11-22 . chapter 24
I love this story.
Like, the characters seem a lot realer than other stories where the guy's a complete jerk and the girl's completely oblivious.
They both have.. character to themselves.
I love it.

Plus, this seriously makes me laugh out loud,
backtrack,
reread,
and laugh even more.

Okay, please update!
righthere431 2009-11-19 . chapter 23
Oh what's he going to show her?!
xHopeLesSdReaMeRx 2009-11-19 . chapter 24
please update soon!! i'm really hooked with Sydney and Oliver's story. I couldn't even sleep well the other night thinking about it. haha!
Esh 2009-11-14 . chapter 24
Pleaseupdatepleaseupdatepleaseupdatepleaseupdatepleaseupdate please, update! NOW! :D
HoneyAppleEater 2009-11-14 . chapter 24
OHMIGOD!
I freakin luv this story! XD
I just spent teh last couple ofhours reading teh whole thing. Luv it!
Update Son XD
blackroxduh17 2009-11-12 . chapter 24
aww!! please review! please please please please please! REVIEW! thanks!
D. L. Cross 2009-11-10 . chapter 24
I finally get time to touch my inbox. This turned out pretty cute but the last scene made me quite paranoid. Is she leaving for good?

Sydney is so strong - she's emotionally drained and yet she can muster so much strength to deal with life. I love Oliver but I find him really selfish and indecisive but that's life.
iwantanupdate 2009-11-07 . chapter 24
did you die?
hahahahha
i'm kidding
but do you know what would be more amazing then sydney and oliver geting together?
AN UPDATE!
u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME 2009-11-07 . chapter 24
aw cutest story in the world! update son! u didnt update in a month :(
dwpea 2009-11-07 . chapter 24
read what there was in one go and...
IT WAS BLOODY WONDERFUL!
seriously its a really captivating story.

Is sydney going to explode one day? her self talks are not dealing with her past or issues...she's an emotional wreck yet she has this strength in her as well. Really admirable! You're such an amazing writer.

Oliver is so selfish in so many ways. He wants Kylie as his girlfriend but can't stop 'flirting' and giving himself (emotionally) to Sydney. He's hurting Sydney and adding to her unsolved emotional baggage.

I'm writing too much...

Can't wait till the nxt chapter comes out!
kimpossible 2009-11-03 . chapter 24
please update?
i need to know what's going to happen to oliver and sydney!
j3welzinc 2009-11-03 . chapter 1
Update soon?? This is torture. I need Sydney to be happy with Ollie.Please? =)
lara 2009-11-02 . chapter 24
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
ah i'm suffering from oliver and sydney withdrawls!
hahahhahaha
but please update soon!
i absolutely love this story to pieces and i love the characters; they're so realistic
and sydney is the best MC ever hands down!
and i adore oliver to
i can't wait to see what happens next!
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