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   IndigoAzucena 5/1/08 . chapter 2So. I'm currently studying for my AP World test but which is tomorrow (technically today) but I saw this in my inbox and decided that I kind of had to read it. As in, I had no option. I'm so glad I did, even though I have completely forgotten what I just memorized about WWI. It's really good. Please keep on going. |
| fatso17 4/30/08 . chapter 2 I found one mistake: "determinedly locker on the slow strut " "locker"-"locked" But yeah, good chapter. It had plenty of laughs and the jock and nerd being best friends is a ice twist. *grins* update ASAP! |
| shy green rock 4/30/08 . chapter 2 OH MY GOD! His best friend? Wow that is good. Great job, I so did not expect that. haha and her bra aww. I think nothing is going to happen between Patrick/Billy boy, but rather between Oliver and Sydney. I at least know I want it like that haha. |
| LiMay 4/30/08 . chapter 2 oh wow! that was unexpected! |
| simplicity is complex 4/30/08 . chapter 2 OMG that's all i can say. and she really is. i don't know what word to use. her shirt! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA |
| Sayacinari 4/30/08 . chapter 2 oh snap, he didnt just say that at the end. lol |
| Pione 4/30/08 . chapter 2 OH! :):) I can't wait to read the next chapter! :) |
| she's dreaming 4/30/08 . chapter 2 love it |
| Lady Wrye 4/30/08 . chapter 2 Wow, I'm so in love with your story. It is so cute and enjoyable! Please do continue! :D |
| Kicon 4/30/08 . chapter 2 Man, I'm really starting to like this Sydney character! You've defined her personality really well. I didn't catch any mistakes, but that's me. Awesome and update son! Kicon |
| FireFallon 4/30/08 . chapter 2 My, I haven't laughed so hard in a while...thank you. Update soon! |
| oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE 4/30/08 . chapter 2 well well well! i didnt see any of that coming! sounds like something that would happen to one of my friends and i would just be there laughing like paige. lol awesome storyy |
| xMsxUnlucky92 4/30/08 . chapter 2 D Yays! The best friend thing was kind of surprising, and it makes this all the more interesting! Haha, stalking is such a tossed about term... she was more... obsessing. Tisk tisk, Oliver. Can't you tell the difference? The incident with Adam was hilarious, it's definitely something my four year old nephew would do to me. ] |
| Jay827 4/30/08 . chapter 2 omg! that is freaking HILARIOUS! jesus. haha her bra. haha. and then shy kid from the library being his best friend. hmm. this could be a definite advantage for her. update when possible! :) |
| xbrunnettex0 4/30/08 . chapter 2 HAHAHA THATS SOO EMBARISSING. id be like UM okay this day keeps getting better and better! hahaha omgg. he sounds hot tho.. but i want her to go out with billy/patrick.. but there step brother and sister thats a little odd. |
