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kloun mannequin 2008-05-08 . chapter 1
makes me think a group of friends wondering about love.
JasmineDelilahBarlow 2008-05-01 . chapter 1
Holy poo... I really like this.

I'm working on an English project where we have to collect 15 poems about abstract words. One of mine is love. Would you mind if I used yours to analyze??
darkflame1516 2008-05-01 . chapter 1
wow...that is really good...
i've felt like that before...was the worst feeling in the world...
.unuttered.thoughts. 2008-04-29 . chapter 1
this has very strong emotion in it. wonderful job
Yusuf 2008-04-29 . chapter 1
Nice poem, I see a bit of myself in it. Not just in the topic, but in the style :).

Love beings when he looks at you and smiles.
His eyes sparkle because of the beauty he sees
His lips tremble, for what they are about speak
And the anticipation of the first kiss
Stops the universe in time

~Yusuf
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