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| kloun doll 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abusemakes me think a group of friends wondering about love. |
| Jasmine Delilah 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseHoly poo... I really like this. I'm working on an English project where we have to collect 15 poems about abstract words. One of mine is love. Would you mind if I used yours to analyze?? |
| darkflame1516 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusewow...that is really good... i've felt like that before...was the worst feeling in the world... |
| Schizophrenic.iv-personalit... 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abusethis has very strong emotion in it. wonderful job |
| Yusuf 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseNice poem, I see a bit of myself in it. Not just in the topic, but in the style :). Love beings when he looks at you and smiles. His eyes sparkle because of the beauty he sees His lips tremble, for what they are about speak And the anticipation of the first kiss Stops the universe in time ~Yusuf |