I think it's one your best ones. Even though it made me really sad lol.

You mean kind of what you did to me?.. that line just sounded a bit awkward

I like this... the story behind it is good and very realistic. I also like the ending.

Wow. Slow-moving, but thought-provoking. Very good. Continue in this vein, and you will do well.

Godspeed,

Lord Of The Marsh

'cause the rhyme I think it sounds more like a song, I like the verses 1 & 3, 1 had good flow

ooh, I like it. Especially the small bits of ironic, almost sadistic humor. Very good. But I can't help but ask... what's with all the o's?

I really like this poem, its sad but well written. I really, really, really love the imagery of "walking this broken road." I think its great, and just that line may have given my inspiration for another poem...and I haven't written for a while lol.

This is beautiful, keep writing.

It packed a message. Nice work. Have a marvelous day.

~Twilight Starr~

The saddest thing.

It's not slipping, you're going through a writer's block. But I like this one. The third stanza was my favourite.

~Yusuf

P.S.: This might be of some help: Writing to me, is like crying, never forced. I just write when I feel something, the things I want to say to the other person, but can't. :)