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creepy kiss on tuesday
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abuseI love the first stanza, probably because that's one of my biggest fears.
Twilight Starr
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseNice title. The last two lines were my favorite. Good job! Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~
missjohannalee
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abusethis is nice...simple, yet it captures emotions that i've personally felt quite clearly

keep writing =)
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