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| Hallie Stunt 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abusethis is sad, and hopeful at the same time beautiful job connecting the two emotions! |
| Solstice Of Light 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseseems like one of those wartime poems where the man goes off and never comes back, or she falls in love with somebody else, which is quite cliche, but you pull it off rather nicely. I like the line about butterflies, even if it makes absolutely no sense! SoL |
| lookin4nemo 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseaw this is great! trust those butterflies buddy! ~ur cuz~ |