Reviews for and maybe i'm a masochist

fairytale failure 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuseOhh, I love it. You have some wonderful descriptive phrases, I really like 'your lips uneven and malice tinted' and the very first line. The dialogue sounds great and keeps the piece interesting. One thing that confused me was the last line - I wasn't sure what you mean't by 'you're exactly that'. Is she broken and not beautiful, or broken and beautiful? Maybe you could make it clearer, otherwise I enjoyed reading this a lot.
Faith Adeline 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abusegood job. I really liked it :) Faith
Scarlett Wynter 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abusei love it. the imagery is just wonderful. excellent job
perpetual questions 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abusecreepy-angsty-good, what else? xD