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| simpleplan13 2008-05-21 ch 1,  | abuseI really love the middle line. It was powerful and well phrased. I like it a lot... very well done. |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseLoved the wordchoice in this! The last line was simple, but effective... likewise for the title. Good job. -Silence |
| Imagined Insanity 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuselove it. reminds me why i like haiku's so much. |
| AK the Twilight 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThis poem just feels heavy. Heavy in a good way, I mean. The whole thing is dark and cryptic. And the use of such long, intricate language in a haiku is worth some serious merit. This was haunting, but a great read in itself. |
| shinco 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseCool Haiku! I read your profile and I think it would be a cool idea to give us a link to your booklet with a bunch of your stuff in it! That'd be neat! Not only do we have your writing, but we also have a visual of what you're feeling at the time! Sounds awesome! Can't wait to see it! GO SHAZAAM! |
| alittlebitconfused 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseNice, I really like it. Haiku's are so hard to capture emotion in only seventeen syllables, but you did a great job. |