Nice poem. Though at first I found this formatting to be a bit distracting from the words I grew to like it as I continued reading. It added to the effect of the title and the meaning of the poem, it was a blur. Good job

it was all in a blur, lol.. i liked the style.. **off to read more

excellent!
and BRILLIANT editing.
if i saw this poster, i would totally buy it.
great job!

--sv