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| Maplewing 2008-05-13 ch 4,  | abuse"this writer’s piece will leave a taste in one’s mouth similar to the aftertaste of aspartame guzzled from a carbonated beverage can left out in 1 degree heat for 16 years." Awesome line! xD |
| R.E.D. the animator 2008-05-13 ch 4, | abuseOh dear, I almost fall under that catigory. The only difference is that people DO review my stories. |
| ZizziHungarian 2008-05-13 ch 4, | abuseWill you write more, or this is the end? I hope you will! Now I know what mistakes I made during writing my stories. Thanks for the help! And I'm waiting for more! |
| Writers block anon. 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abusei like it. However, you spelt "freinds" wrong, and "peruse"... is that meant to be "persued"? I'm not sure of that one... O.o Don't rip seven shades of * out of my name... i have a feeling that "couldn'tthinkofadecentname-itis" is on the list out there... i think my name is snazzy... looking forward to the next installment. ^^ |
| i found nemo 2008-05-10 ch 3, | abuseAbsolutely hilarious! Can't wait to see what the last two afflictions are |
| Maplewing 2008-05-09 ch 3, | abuseExcellent job as usual! lol! I can relate to this one; I've seen a few of them around. ~Maplewing PS- Especially from this kid I know who's morbidly obsessed with Chick Norris, as in the example only worse. But anyway. I digress. Great chapter! |
| Princess Dargon 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseVery funny! I love it even though I may fall into 'Lazy Rearitis', but I'm trying! And there is one mistake on that page, often and too are two different words and you have them as one: "Sufferers of this ailment are oftentoo lazy to change" Other than that, Awesome! |
| miscellanea 2008-05-08 ch 3, | abuseAgain very good... keep 'em coming! -Your fan, Miscellanea |
| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-05-08 ch 3, | abuseThat is so true-- in stories as well! Where author's will just post these (very annoyingly frequent) a/n's about how this is true, happened to them, blah blah... Update soon! |
| Doom08 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseSweet, I love this. I might have some symptoms, I have to check, but I really love this. |
| R.E.D. the animator 2008-05-03 ch 2, | abuseWow! This is scary and funny! It's ironic that this story can be found sorrounded by the very stories that it's making fun of. I await the next affliction. |
| Tu Amor 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseLol so true :) But you spelled two words in "I worte this aobut my friend" wrong. Sorry, I have OCD. Anyways, very witty :D |
| Maplewing 2008-05-03 ch 2, | abuseGreat job, still as hilarious (but true) as ever. I love the disclaimer! ~Maplewing |
| ham337dd 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abuseClever :) Waiting for the last three afflictions. |
| miscellanea 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abuseI guess you shud post mor of this stry. MayB i'l chek it out if i hav time. Plz go nd chk out my $tuff, but it's not that good. I wrote it when I was boared. This site is stuped nyways. |