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Reviews For: Deep Within My Soul

ohthevoices
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseI really liked the "drunk on silence" line. I've had a pretty crummy day, and this poem describes exactly what I want at the moment...
Moon's Poetess
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseIt actually sounds as if you're trying to invite someone in. Nice piece, it sorta just... flows... makes me think... blue... pretty... calm... yes... =)
I Am Ghost
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseThis was actually really pretty.
I loved it.
=]
Great job!
Faith Adeline
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseI like it. Not my favorite, but still good. :)
Faith
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