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| Painted.Illusion 2008-04-29 ch 1,  | abuseAmazing piece, very provokative. A man trying to justify/question his actions. Very interesting... |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abusehmm, gave me some shivers ha. Great job. The poem is powerful and emotional, which are two things you want in a poem. Great piece overall. :) Faith |
| Kharmaoftherainbow 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseLoved the use of bold, italics and parentheses. It really got the point across and flowed. Especially like the syllogism in the first stanza. The third line in your last stanza is a little unwieldy though. |