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| ohthevoices 2008-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I love how 17 syllables can say so much. |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseLoved this. It’s Simple but effective - which is always the best in my opinion. I especially liked the 'boy' being in bold... as if he is a child stressing a point to the adults who just aren’t listening (though maybe not, I sometimes read too much into things). Anyways, good job. -Silence |
| lookin4nemo 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseaw... is this is awasome! is it about like a father dying and the soldiers coming to tell him that he is the "man of the house" aw |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abusegood haiku. I liked it :) Keep it up! Faith |