Reviews for Coming, Searching, Waiting

Moon's Poetess 2008-05-03 ch 1,	abuseWow. Poetic brilliance. The last lines are interesting. I like how you put the insistent "please!" before the more desperate, pleading ". . . please?" Very nice effect.
lookin4nemo 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abusehey great piece! i love you way of putting the things in to ()'s and the ... 's keep it up!
Faith Adeline 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abuseWow. I love it! Just the power in the words, is great. Very emotional. Faith