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| Yusuf 2008-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this, has a really nice message. ~Yusuf |
| Richard Lynch 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI don't know why I didn't find you earlier, because I'm loving your poetry. Once again, a fine use of Lewis Carrol. You put your own take on things, but also retained that bleak sort of absurdity the original work has. Swell job! I just may have to favorite this. You've got a lake full of poems, and I only have one boat filled half way with time, but I plan to read a lot more. Expect some long over-due reviews! |
| lonely silhouette 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseLOVE IT. Both the idea, and the fact that it involved Alice in Wonderland. Lol, for some odd reason I have always liked that movie. Powerful and true. This is going on my Fav Stories list :) --A Raindrop's Shadow |
| Kiwi-kiwi6 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is powerful. |
| An Inside Joke 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseGreat last 2 lines. I don't know if you need the "Alice says""Said the Cat" after the first line of each charecter's dialog. It breaks up the flow, and the reader can pretty much infer who's saying what because of the literary reference. |
| Undrahas 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseno matter what path you choose rain will fall. very good becuase it shows the struggle of all people. it shows our struggle to choose a path, but once we realize that rain falls on both we take the path that we choose. we want a path where no rain fall, and so we look for that path...but in the end we realize that rain falls on both, and theres nothing to be done. |
| Peanuts Factory 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuse*Applauds* Very much true. There is no easy path in life. |