aw so cute! i loved it!

This was really funny...my favorite line:

"“No, I just wanted to make sure this door was really oak.” Casey drew out each word slowly, emphasizing the pronunciation."

Genius! :P

Wow! I never such a strong urge to review! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! I mean your style is hilarious and it makes your characters completely unforgettable! It makes us want to know more about them, we almost feel like we would want to meet people like that. You make them sound interesting and casual, which is a difficult thing to do, usually. Can't wait to read more from you!


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This story was clever and entertaining. I enjoyed it.

I liked it. Here. You can redeem this token for me not making fun of you when I read your LoveRomanceYay story, which I am saving for last.

You don't have detail, which I personally enjoy. However, you make up for it with a quick mapping of character for each of those involved. Your dialect is well done for a conversation and I do have to say, realistic. Keep it up.

This is brilliant!! Good job!

its awesome but you should have a follow up chapter

ha ha ha
Thats awesome!

this is good

Aww this is actually really cute!
Very well written too
Good luck with the rest of your writing :]

Nice.^^ :3

I liked the dialogue. I thought that it was well done and believable. The ending was cute but it seemed kind of rushed since it was like she was annoyed by him and then after a couple of lines, she likes him.

Nice job though.

Cute! :) Nicely written. :D

ahahhaah
i loved it. The ending was kind of non-believingly weird, but that's what made it awesome.

=)