Wow. This is really progressing fast! For some reason I liked your writing style better in these last two chapters- it could just be because I haven't read this story in awhile... I'm really curious to see what Michael thought of all of this. Overall good job!

This is a great story! please continue to update!

I had just finished reading what there was to read and I'm completely sucked in. I'm excited about what is going to happen next! UPDATE SOON! :)

Wow. Just...wow.

Yay! Another chapter...finally. lol anyway goodjob. I'm excited to read the parts where the two main characters start interacting. Update soon.

Keep writing. You're good at it. Please update, I'm loving it already.

Nice story. I can't believe Pippi's sick though. That's sad. But everything's nicely written and all. Lots of detail. Hope you update soon. I'm putting you on alert.

Ugh! I'm going to have too many stories on alert now! I don't have time to read all of these! Oh well, I'll get over it...besides this one really deserves it. Good job, update soon please!

so normally i only read m rated stories cuz usually the quality is better, but ur story caught my eye so i decided to give it a shot. i am so glad that I did. It is very good so far.

it was nice to know more about the guy...i really like this story so far. :) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

I loved all the detail in the beginning (and throughout the whole chapter for that matter) i could truly see every single detail you describe. :)

I'm curious to see this develop :)