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| Almsivi 2008-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this! It was full of strong emotions and imagery. However, your Spanish looks a bit off. Right now it looks like it says, "To a day you go to eat as a king." If you said "hay un dia que usted comerá como un Rey," that would probably work better, because your sentence would mean "there is a day that you will eat like a king." |
| J. D. Boller 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing! I love it! |