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| simpleplan13 2008-05-21 ch 5,  | abuseI like this. Very powerful description, especially with that last line. |
| simpleplan13 2008-05-21 ch 7, | abuseInteresting adjectives. I like it a lot. |
| NekuraSunshine 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abusehint: the middle line should be 7 syllables. ^_^ |