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| ms silverquill 2008-05-30 ch 1,  | abuseThis is beautiful. You manage to convey so much emotion in such an elegant way. I love the line about "beauty as brittle as butterfly bones." |
| Isca 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseMy gosh! Please keep writing more work! You have endless amounts of talent! |
| I Am Ghost 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was probably one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read. The way you describe things is beautiful, and I can see images in my head, like a picture show. I like the idea of broken fingers, and fragile butterfly bones. Really beautiful. =] |