This is so gorgeous, I love the idea of "tracing constellations on each other's skin" and "streetlamps shining brightly in your eyes". Take care.

i really need to go stargazing one day.

this sparkles with beauty. :) great work.

Gorgeous! I love the ending, especially how you connect constellations to being made of stardust.

The meaning is good, but to be honest you need to find a different structure. It's very choppy and detracts from the poem as a whole. But it is a good poem.

Pretty. I love the fifth stanza especially and that general idea of tracing patterns of stars on skin... I really like this.

good piece, I really liked it. And I love that you mentioned Lake Michigan, cause I live near there lol. Good job :)
Faith