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| HMH 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseVery musical. |
| she smolders 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseThe ending of this was startling. I like the twist of calling fingers "ironic chopsticks" a lot too. This is a hard topic to write about sometimes without sounding pretentious or cliche so the short, blunt style was refreshing and honest-sounding in a way that surprised me. Take care. |