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HMH
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abuseVery musical.
she smolders
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseThe ending of this was startling. I like the twist of calling fingers "ironic chopsticks" a lot too. This is a hard topic to write about sometimes without sounding pretentious or cliche so the short, blunt style was refreshing and honest-sounding in a way that surprised me. Take care.
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