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Reviews For: The Promise

SweetSin 2008-05-01 . chapter 1

I loved it!

instantramen 2008-05-01 . chapter 1

Awesome as always. ;)

XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-04-30 . chapter 1

Very cute! Feels a little incomplete. But still nicely done!

XKristie MarieX

correlation 2008-04-30 . chapter 1

This is really sweet! I like the rhyming because its not overwhelming or corny like most poems. Great job :)

Dandelion Cupcakes 2008-04-30 . chapter 1

flows well and all the rhyming works nicely... really well writren good job

princess meillure 2008-04-30 . chapter 1

wow I feel so protected. thank you

phantom66 2008-04-30 . chapter 1

auwsome rhyme throughout
phantom66