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| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-05-01 ch 1,  | abuseIt was a little hard to read due to the format, although I liked the words you used, and how you repeated some lines. Although I may have seen better from you. You're good at describing emotions as always! keep it up! The Reverse Edge Blade |